![]() ![]() I did some minor cleanup on the text, and I think they came back earlier than '95, but would have to look it up and I'm feeling lazy right now. What say you, Tim? What say you, NSR77? JSC ltd 20:14, 20 January 2007 (UTC) Reply I think this article no longer requires cleanup. I edited the introduction to sound more NPOV. I have revised the infobox by adding complete information about pickups and the body size and material, and correct information about the neck joint and fretboard. I am more than willing to discuss and debate whatever changes I make on the Talk page, as you can see please return my good faith effort at collaboration in the spirit in which I intend it: to make an informative and accurately detailed article about an interesting topic. Unless vandalism occurs, however, try to avoid beginning a reversion war whenever you disagree with the contributions of others. Obviously, as this article's creator, you have a certain attachment to it. The thing about an online encyclopedia that *anyone* can edit is that sometimes people edit articles you create, and sometimes, those people are at least as knowledgeable on a given topic as you are-I know this, because it has happened to me. ![]() If the goal is to create a hyperbolic ad full of unfounded superlatives, it belongs on a personal website, rather than Wikipedia. If establishing a high-quality article on a relevant and interesing instrument is the goal, we can work together on this piece to make it a fine page indeed. For instance, this article should cite some historical material rather than a website designed to sell instruments. NSR77, while I can appreciate your admiration for this particular kind of guitar and share your fondness for the Chili Peppers, I must insist that this article leaves something to be desired. And JSC is right, the text in general needs some MAJOR help. You reverted too far back, introducing quite a few errors back into it (notably the neck joint). I reverted the article back to my previous rendition considering your version dumbed down the literacy level too much. JSC ltd 00:30, 16 December 2006 (UTC) Reply To that end, I'm making some changes that better reflect this instrument's place in the development of electric guitars. This article needs to sound less like a sales brochure, however. The White Falcon is certainly a remarkable instrument. Learn to spell! it is engraved not ingraved! This article is supported by Guitar equipment task force. This article has been rated as Start-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. Guitarists Wikipedia:WikiProject Guitarists Template:WikiProject Guitarists guitarist articles If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks. ![]() This article is within the scope of WikiProject Guitarists, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Guitarists on Wikipedia. The Free Image Search Tool or Openverse Creative Commons Search may be able to locate suitable images on Flickr and other web sites. Please replace this template with a more specific media request template where possible. It is requested that an image or photograph be included in this article to improve its quality. ![]()
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